Setting the moodWe see moonbeams flooding through the blinds creating an eerie shadow across the hotel room. Then we see light emerge through the cracks in the door and the feet under the door of a person. As McQueen enters the space we want to technically create a sillhotte as he stand in the doorway of the hotel room. To give a feel of film-noir. Stark lighting beaming across the stage. We only see his face as he enters the space via the moonbeam through the window. He walks around the room. Places his coat on the bed and lights the two lamps. He then looks into the dressing table mirror (quite confident with a smile) and ensures he’s looking his best.
From the shadowsThree masked figures rush from the shadows, McQueen scrambles across the bed. Two of the masked assailants grab him, he tries to escape, they punch him back to the bed. Once he’s subdued he is placed firmly on a chair as the bigger of the three masked men throws rope and tape to the other two before putting the ‘Do not disturb’ sign on the outside of the door. They sit allowing their friend to take over. He wanders to the window winding up the blinds and ensuring all is quite outside. Then he starts to encircle the bloodied victim.
Building up Characters at the beginning
Before we hear McQueen speak we really want to build up the tension with the others and get a feel for each of their characters. We know the leader by now. He’s controlling the situation from the minute he gives the others jobs to do. (Tying him up). Hanson asks the questions at the beginning. We see once the address book has been examined that the three men react slightly differently. Hanson intimidating McQueen with his knife and asking specific questions. Jarrett never takes his eyes off of McQueen as if in some battle of wills. Ellis becoming preoccupied with the address book with a look of disbelief that his wife has betrayed him.
We see Ellis early on now as more nervous than in earlier rehearsals. Looking to Hanson for answers. Almost as if he is asking permission to speak. His disbelief turns to anger and he cannot control himself from wanting to hit McQueen. Constantly being ushered away by Hanson. Jarrett playing on the fact that his wife has been brutally murdered he seems colder with often a dark wit. We laugh when he asks McQueen if he thinks he’s ‘Fred Astaire’ we want the audience to believe that Jarrett is quite capable of doing some rather nasty things. Which makes it even more shocking when Hanson slashes his cheek after losing his temper.
Hanson is caught between wanting to seem professional by intimidating him and often losing his temper with the answers he receives. When Jarrett grabs his fingers with the pliers he makes no attempt to stop it. But after he becomes more and more curious with what McQueen is saying he eventually stops Ellis all together from hitting him as he wants to learn everything about his wife and the events.
Breaking themMcQueen is often in pain and tries several tactics to ensure his safety. He tells the truth (or what seems to be the plausible truth). He always backs up his statements by saying ‘Hey that’s how it is’ or ‘It’s a business’ so as to deflect the blame. He starts to cleverly appear not as a man who has been caught having an affair but providing a good service for the husbands. ‘Being them’ ‘I am you’ as he points out. McQueen sees that this might not be working and changes tactics by implanting a loose idea that he will change. He’ll go back to being a carpenter. Though he’s beyond convincing the three men of this. He goes for the jugular. Revealing the personal secrets of Ellis.
We have to remember that McQueen knows these men’s weaknesses or at least things that would break them through their wives.
McQueen sees Ellis becoming more and more volatile and waits for his moment to strike. Ellis has been examining himself in the mirror before looking at the knife. McQueen sees his chance before Ellis does something crazy. Leaving the poor Ellis distraught.
It’s a powerful moment when he finally breaks down and Jarrett laughs at him.
Ellis clearly upset but knowingly not having the guts to go through with it and kill McQueen he drops the knife feeling betrayed by everyone. Jarrett makes one last chance to apologise and console him, but by then Ellis is a broken man. The venom of truth taking effect in his veins. He leaves hurriedly never looking back.